@_Yuan04 eyyy. Don't worry, you're doing fine! Man, I love the pictures that you're putting in. It really sets in the vibe. You don't have to change a thing, man.
Don't say sorry for thinking that your story's quality ain't good enough, because I think your writing is even better than mine. With all honesty.
Slow updates? Nah. Take your time. You know what? I've been in hiatus for about 5 or 6 months? That is slow. But 2-4 days? Nah. Don't worry 'bout anything.
Seriously, don't say sorry. I'm sure you know that we won't be winning 70% of our first tries. Just keep going. Keep up the good work! Your story just hadn't gained the readers yet, but soon it will and the feedback you'll receive will be awesome!