Viktorija

Hey there!! Since you like to read (or I'm assuming you do, anyway), I was wondering if you would read, comment your thoughts maybe on my story: My Name Is Alice...? I'm trying to get it noticed for the Watty Awards 2013. Please, please, and thanks so much if you do!!
          -Skai

So i wrote my first chapter of Make it alive. Please tell me what you think. Is it worth to continue?