HeartlessKira
Ahoy.
So, I wanted to say THANK YOU for following me and reading my stories. It is more than just appreciated.
<3
HeartlessKira
malec_fortris
bands are life!!!!!!! :-)
malec_fortris
your profile picture is cool
ClariceBookman
When will your second book be out for I Got the Wrong Mate?
HeartlessKira
So, I finished I Got The Wrong Mate and Got to work to my second book of my werewolf seria! I am not sure about the name yet, but I am already half way through the first chapter. Also, check out the rest of my stories!~
valeriestar12345
Update I got the wrong mate!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You are a good writer
HeartlessKira
New chapter of " I Got The Wrong Mate" is up. I think it's nearing to an end, so you guys better read the story. Also, I am continuing with my writing at the book "Change" Because I kinda stopped. Hope you guys like it and that I will enjoy your support some more. I AM PLANNING A SEQUEL, So you guys better look forward to it!
Fanquinine
Hello! Thanks for your votes on Vicious Legacy, I hope you enjoy the rest of the story ;)
HeartlessKira
@AnthonyWesly8 I shall wait then. In the meantime I stopped reading but I'll try the Stepbrother.
Arisou
One reason I find it hard to fancy your stories is that all of them have to have a troubled past. It's way too obvious and I know exactly what to expect. I can just read one chapter and know exactly how the rest of the story goes. You should be more unpredictable and make it exciting. Twists here and there. I don't feel that when I read your stories. I feel bored and like I have mentioned before I know how it goes. Be more unpredictable and take risks. Don't be so obvious! Now don't take this as me attacking you. I'm just telling you what I personally think, And I believe you should take it into consideration. Thank you for taking your time and reading this. -Kaji
Arisou
Oh, Is that so? I suppose we should talk more often then. So my messages don't suprise you. And It's really my pleasure to give you a tip or two. Because I might not be the only one who thinks that way. And some constructive criticism is never a bad thing, correct? I'm glad you will take my advice into consideration, I will look forward to see what you come up with next. Another tip, Go through the concept of the story a few times before you write it. Because you might stop at a certain point when you run out of ideas. In the mean time, Text me or Chat me up on IMVU whenever you feel like it. -Kaji
HeartlessKira
First I have to admit I am surprised to even see a message from you Kaji and I appreciate your honest opinnion , I also appreciate the fact you took your time to read my stories.
I will try my best taking your advice into consideration, hopefully I will hear from you soon. -Jacob.