Scorlion
First of all i apologise if my comment have offended you regarding 'HIS REVENGE'. . . . .m not a writer but i said what i felt. . .it's not that ur story was bad its that u didn't put effort in creating the characters and execute the emotion otherwise the plot was nice. . .and i hope with ur future stories u will do ur best. . .GOOD LUCK. .:-)
HeatherStevens0
no you didnt offend me at all, to be honest i felt that i should take it down and redo it when ever i get the chance, i also felt it didnt come out the way i wanted it to lol but thank u for ur honesty like i said i dont care if it was bad or not lol i just wanted to hear what people thought :D