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Flopy-chan_7w7

Good evening, writer. I just wanted to say that I love the overall context of the story. Over the years, I've only found one seduction system story set in the world of Naruto. As you can see, this type of fanfic is in high demand. It shows in the views your story receives. I wanted to share some recommendations for your story.
          
          1. I recommend giving your character a name. If it has a special meaning, even better. For example: Hikari means light. (You could make her name have something to do with her main personality. In this case, you could consider the protagonist as a kind of light for others.)
          
          2. Seduction is equivalent to intelligence. That is, only an intelligent woman who knows her target, with the ability to act and adapt to the personality of the man she is trying to seduce, can succeed. In other words, the protagonist must be intelligent and careful with her actions. Ultimately, she will have to deceive a shinobi, an expert in the art of deception.
          
          3. I don't expect the protagonist to be promiscuous, but she can't behave like a virginal saint either. With characters like Kakashi, there comes a time when you have to be direct about what you want. It's okay to toy with him, make him uncomfortable, etc., but making things clear ("that the protagonist loves him") is fine so the target knows how you feel.
          
          4. I'm sharing the fanfic I mentioned at the beginning. It's very good, in fact, the best. It will be very useful; it has the kind of protagonist you'd expect from a seduction system. There's also a manwua, where the protagonist also seduces and deceives. It doesn't have a system, but it's very good.

Flopy-chan_7w7

10. Finally, don't forget that being a seductress goes beyond being beautiful. It's a broad art that requires knowledge of every possible area: politics, economics, culture, art, education, philosophy. Beauty only entertains the target for the first 5 minutes; then, if you want them to stay, you have to capture their attention with other things. 
            
            Anyway, a lot of text, you're probably thinking, haha. I'll leave the link to the story below  
            
            Fanfic Name: Hokage of Ruin Transformation 
            Link: https://www.fanmtl.com/novel/ke2378.html
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Flopy-chan_7w7

5. Something important: don't try to make her stand out in every detail. I mean, many writers strive to make sure that any problem that arises, the protagonist can solve it or resolve the enigma. Being smart also means knowing when to keep quiet and not talking too much. Also, making her stand out so much all at once is uncomfortable. I think there's one chapter you're rewriting where the protagonist had a fight with Sakura and practically half the village was watching. It's very uncomfortable. Focus on developing each character's perspective individually. At least at first, remember that she's weak and can't defend herself against major threats.
            
            6. As for the protagonist's goals, I think the ones that can give them the most points are those characters who do not open up so easily to relationships: Kakashi, Neji, Shikamaru (especially him, since being intelligent it will be difficult to seduce him)
            
            7. There are already plenty of fanfics where the protagonist wants to save everyone; those stories are already tiresome. Let's see if we can create a selfish protagonist who only cares about her own interests and not those of others. After all, these people are just tools to help her grow stronger.
            
            8. Characters like Sakura and Ino are shallow girls, and one could argue that they're also immature and unintelligent. Characters with these traits can't be rivals for the protagonist. If you want to hinder their growth, you could, for example, have weak characters obsess over her for her charm. That would generate a lot of drama.
            
            9. This is one of my favorites, but I love narcissistic, semi-psychopathic protagonists. When I say psychopaths, I don't mean they're unhinged killers, but rather they don't care about other people's lives. Sure, they may pretend to care, but deep down, they feel nothing.
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