HeavenlyFire567

Hey so I just update on my book 'looks are decieving' check it out. 
          	 it's been a while

HeavenlyFire567

hello everyone
          I know I have disappeared for a while now but I have been really busy with Christmas and holiday and work that I haven't had a lot of time to right my next chapter but I promise that I will DEFINATELY get it up on Sunday in Australia. I am righting it currently and I know that the chapters aren't that long but because this is partly a true story from experiences both me, my friends and my book characters have gone through, I'm trying to make it a llllllllloooooooonnnnnnngggggggg book. I really hope you guys understand.
          Love you guys very much
          Love Nicola_Joan

HeavenlyFire567

a sneak peak of chapter one, it should be ready by Tuesday night, Wednesday at the latest
          
          I felt and heard a crack, I spun into the wall, I don't know if it was Dad or Luca who hit me but the pain coming from the left side of my head was unbearable. Everything went fuzzy, the room was spinning and I couldn't hear anything clearly, it all sounded very far away. I saw Dad and Luca come towards me with hatred in their eyes, Dad raised his fist and slammed it into my stomach, I doubled over in pain, I felt a kick to my ribs and heard the front door open. I saw my mum scream at them and faintly heard it, but before anything else happened I passed out.
          
          Looks Are Deceiving
          Nicola Joan xox