Heavyarms

sorry i havent been posting anything everyone. havent had anything that would come out right yet i hope to post something soon tho...not shure if ill get the chance but ill try.

M51exposed

Hi! Could you read my story?!?! Plz! I really need some feed back! COOL! 
          
          Prologue… 
          
          215 years. It's been 215 years since I was born. Today is my 215th birthday. Sometimes though I wish that my life had ended 200 years ago. When I look in the mirror, I don't see an old woman. I don't see a young woman. That's just it, I don't see myself at all when I look in the mirror. I'll give you three guesses- what am I? 
          I know what you're thinking. "there is no such thing as vampires. They only exist in myths and legends and the occasional modern fiction novel." 
          Well, you're right, sort of. Vampires as portrayed in horror books, or even romance books, are fiction. But just because some over-creative author portrayed us wrong, we don't exist? Wrong. We do exist. We aren't human. We live forever. Or at least until I was made. 
          I am the exception. 
          
          DO YOU LIKE IT??????????????? YES? NO? THEN READ THE REST!!!!!