Scarface Hunter

Actually three parts…
            
            Part 3:
            
            Cuz let’s be real, what the hell is that kind of torture you wrote lol your imagination is as dangerous as it is beautiful haha, so use it in two or three chapters of pure character and relationship development. You are not cringe or cliche when it comes to romance which I applaud you on so play to your strengths instead of abstract foreshadowing and suffering and stuff. I would rather the MC turns OP faster to deal with the problems to have much more time on what really matters which is the bond with Shoko which I hope ends with a happy ending that is closed, in other words, a warmly smiling MC and Shoko married and retired with children and stuff. At the end, that is my opinion, I have not tried the other two main Shouko/Shoko x MC yet, I actually read yours first since it was actually being updated, so I wished to help you is all. If you need advice, I am happy to help as much as I can. Do not hold back if you are stuck. 

Part 2:
            
            The “titans” and golden warrior and stuff really hint to a power up and a disaster of the MC’s making which was not hidden too well. I honestly was on the edge of my seat waiting for the MC to open to Shoko in everything about his past, torture, mental brokenness, etc. which would cause both to grow from their anti-social behavior with each other into more bold and dependant and beautiful relationship. I am not talking about trauma bonding, but trauma healing and love and character development. You still have a couple arcs to develop, my best advice is to be original and focus on your main selling point, deep character portrayal through words and intimacy and care that is kind of already is there between them but needs to flourish which will not happen unless you focus on that. I know you are unlike most other authors who follow cannon, which I really like so I am pushing you into exploring that part even more and developing a piece of a beautiful relationship that was built on more than physical attraction and strengthen with the support provided between the couple through their darkest moments.

The message is too long so I will send it in two parts lol.
            
            Part 1:
            
            Hey mate, I could not help but really like your portrayal of Shoko and found it a pity you did not take advantage of really good romantic scenes that would strengthen the bond with the MC or even the cliche drama with potential rival in Erika were not expanded on greatly. I honestly found your writing style, building up, and portrayal to be too good to not try to help. The lack of comments on some humorous scenes gave it up that the audience are not open to providing advice, so I wanted to share my opinion and wishes asap to potentially help you stabilize the story.
            
            I really appreciate your plan for a happy ending, the repeated torture and very short no-communication or much fluff romantic scenes felt lacking just all. I am not against some graphic scenes, it is AFO after all. But the repeated aimlessness was not like you; your buildup of romance until the sports festival was beautifully done after that there was barely anything of note in that regard which you have really great potential in as portrayed by how flirty and persistent you made the MC until the end of the sports festival and the mini-date afterwards. However, you focused much more on abstract things like a possible future, AFO, All Might, and just very self-deprecating scene after scene I had to help you a little.