@Hehehehe_01091997 First I liked the introduction of the story and the characters the most, and that's exactly why I decided to give the story a chance. Then, as I continued reading, the appearance of Jungkook's stepbrother, Joon Ki, further encouraged me to closely follow the development of the story. Perhaps if you're up for a good advice, I would suggest that you should add more detailed descriptions into the story if it's possible, because with them you could capture the readers' attention much better. And one more thing, you can try to show your work to another Wattpad users too, and also try to comment and be supportive a little bit more but not as an over giver. I think with time you will earn more recognition don't be so hard on yourself. Not the views matter. But the quality of your work. :) Wishing you the best!
