Heidi_Gloom

Had to fix a discrepancy in "Olivia" as Maleck indicated he knew where Jerika had been hiding when actually he does not get that info until several chapters later. Whoopsies.

hannahh002

hello 
          i just see your story and i want to give you a friendly suggestion . You should have to update story cover   . As an artist I give you a friendly suggestion  because your story keep under scrolling if your cover is good and your other media stuff is good in story because its catch the reader interest .
          Now adays i work alot for many authors that's why i have a little bit knowledge about it. 
          If you want so we can discuss it further more.

Heidi_Gloom

"Well, you are human now. Maybe your brain is rotting. That happens sometimes to humans," he sniffed the air. "You don't smell rotten though, just raw. Like a freshly slaughtered pig. Do you like tea parties?" 
          
          "I do like tea parties."
          
          "Well if you could come to my next tea party that would be just swell. And I won't even poison you. With anything too deadly."  
          
          Published a few more chapters today. Forgive my inability to commit to first person or 3rd...I'm still working that out. 
          
          I had quite the time rewriting "You owe me a Teaparty." I hope you appreciate the humor.

Heidi_Gloom

Long hiatus from writing. A few years back I had beta readers for a Destruction of Angels and decided the whole thing was trash. Recently I reread some of their comments and realized it wasn't all bad. In fact quite a bit of positive, but for some reason the negative resonated with me. Anyway fixing some things, and ditching some things here and there, but trying to do this just for fun now and not be so hard on myself. It's all a learning process. Cheers.