HelenaDobson

Hi, I've just started posting up my novel, Colin,  it's a story that I've been "perfecting" since I was 15, so if you do have the time I would love for you to have a read over it. I am happy to receive helpful criticism and opinions. If you notice an editing mistake or plot hole please fill me in. I'm honestly a terrible editor. Also I know that Ava never told him her name so it's intentional that he knows it without her introduction. 
          	
          	Also I would be tremendously grateful if you recommended my work to any of your friends/followers. 
          	
          	Cheers :D

HelenaDobson

Hi, I've just started posting up my novel, Colin,  it's a story that I've been "perfecting" since I was 15, so if you do have the time I would love for you to have a read over it. I am happy to receive helpful criticism and opinions. If you notice an editing mistake or plot hole please fill me in. I'm honestly a terrible editor. Also I know that Ava never told him her name so it's intentional that he knows it without her introduction. 
          
          Also I would be tremendously grateful if you recommended my work to any of your friends/followers. 
          
          Cheers :D