HellNo19

Hey guys! 
          	So I just started writing my first book! 
          	So far, I’ve got to the second chapter and wanted people to give me constructive criticism, if needed to carry out the rest of the story. Feel free to check it out and feed back to me. 
          	Thank you in advance :)
          	~ HellNo19
          	https://my.w.tt/6JAOM08GtN