@682_REDACTED I could tell that volatile and Vader’s story seemed similar, I like the way you’ve done that. I always love a good anti hero, a great example of that would be Negan’s redemption in TWD. How far you should lean into it? I’m not too sure, it’s good so far. Maybe just a bit more? It seems like you did the anakin vs obi wan but obi wan was more convincing. I do love that aspect though. Volatile did not become blinded by hatred, he was doing it mainly out of fear i assume.