Heretic Slayer

@whitegrape227, why's your armor off in the first place? Put it back on and kill the xenos in the name of the emperor.

@Basilisk01 I don't know...

@Heretic_Slayer I've made an update. What do you think now? 

@Basilisk01 I like it

@The_Spade_Hunter I'm sorry that I didn't say the much much earlier but thank you for the nice story for me to read.

@Basilisk01 
            1. I like the "improvised ontogeny".
            2. Yes, I was able to understand the scientific terms that was used.
            3. None come to mind from what I know of.
            
            Now for 4 and 5 if you want more varying results, I suggest that you ask other people like other fans of rwby, people who know the show etc. . So that is my opinion about the Verandertiers but like I said is you want more varying results ask other people on what they think about this.

@Heretic_Slayer 
            1. What specific parts about them do you find interesting?
            2. Were you able to understand the scientific terms I used to describe their abilities? 
            3. Any ideas on what I could base some Verandertiers off of? 
            4. What would be a good way to introduce them to the world? Or make them known to the characters?
            5. Should Rooster Teeth implement this idea? Would the result be any good?

@Basilisk01 I like this. I like how it's very unique, I have never heard of this and I think it would be great to add to the Rwby story and it would be interesting to see what would happen to our main protagonist in Rwby. I also like how it's very original.