Hermaise16
@Kocholate26 your welcome can you check out my book and tell me how it is so far thanks
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Hermaise16
@Ihts_Shortiee your welcome. Can you read my book and tell me how I did so far thanks
Hermaise16
@IBasedAlsina your welcome. Can you check out my book to and tell me how I did. Thanks
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Hermaise16
@crunchie17 okay thanks
Hermaise16
@crunchie17 ok ill go back and edit it tomorrow when I wake up. But thanks :) also can you give me a shoutout please.
crunchie17
Okay,glad I could help.
And I have a lot of people asking for shoutouts but I can only do so many at a time but I will add you to the list :)
Hermaise16
@crunchie17 thanks I will and what do you mean by trying to keep up with the peopls p.o.v. and also do you know how to put the character names up and what about there age where would I put that at
crunchie17
Well in one part of it you said it was nobody's POV but then you used 'I' and stuff like it was in Gabe's Pov. And it just constantly changed pov throughout the chapter :)
just do a separate chapter introducing all the characters:)
Hermaise16
@crunchie17 thanks :)
crunchie17
No problem! :) I've just read it and its really good! You should definitely continue it. Just be careful about who's pov you're writing in because it confused me a little when I was reading it but apart from that it was really good and you should definitely continue writing it. Keep it up:)
Hermaise16
@crunchie17 hey can you look at my book called cries of pain please