Sirin_Kaslana

@Herscherr_of_Void Yh I get you that’s why I wrote it like that, they are all mature adults and they should act like it. A period is natural it’s not some sort of freak show.

@Aax_axxx where I come from, period is mostly treated as a taboo so I was expecting a scene where everyone treats it as such except Afaaf and maybe Saheim and maybe a scene of Saheim secretly caring for Afaaf when she's on her period but the way you wrote it was perfect too, everyone was caring for Khala and no one acted weird about it, which was amazing 

@Herscherr_of_Void Thats great! Sorry for the late reply

@Aax_axxx they were fine alhumdulilah, they weren't really hard but I still made some stupid mistakes which is frustrating but it doesn't matter much (at least not rn) cause- I AM FREE AT LAST, it's so glorious to not have any studies at all for a few months 

@Aax_axxx GIRL YOU ARE NOT PRESSURING ME AT ALL! 
            
            Thanks!! 

@Herscherr_of_Void 
            I'm SORRY, THAT WAS NOT SUPPOSED TO BE PRESSURING YOU I JUST WANTED TO KNOW WHAT YOU THOUGHT ABOUT THE CHAPS YOU READ!
            
            ALSO GOOD LUCK FOR YOUR EXAMSSS!!

@Aax_axxx I'm so sorry for replying so late- 
            I actually haven't been reading it cause exam preparation leaves me no time (they start next week) but I have a bit of time today and tomorrow I think so I'll try to catch up on it 

@Herscherr_of_Void thanks for this ❤️❤️ 
            
            Yep I’m just going to go over IWW and I do wanna re write it but not right now, cause I’ve put too much time and right now I want to explore different stories/genres.

@Aax_axxx if you wanna take it down then you should do it and just make sure everything in Alayna's book is explained independent of Ayla's book, but after a while do consider if you wanna rewrite it cause the story is good, and if there's any issue in the telling then your writing has improved over time and will continue to, so you can fix it. But ultimately it's your choice, you can also spend that time writing new stories rather than rewriting, if that's what you prefer 

@Aax_axxx honestly his vibe is so much like Mustafa and I havent even watched much of his interviews/shows/etc

@Herscherr_of_Void LOLLLL SAMEE I FEEL YOU!! 
            
            
            THEY MAKE SUCH A CUTE COUPLE
            
            AND THEM TWO HAVE SIGNED ANOTHER DRAMA CANT WAIT!!!

@Aax_axxx YES my girl achieved her dreams AND she has the dream man, im so happy for her but SO JEALOUS, the brothers really didn't deserve to included in that beautiful ending 

@Herscherr_of_Void  
            
            I’ve seen ppl on TikTok say they didn’t like the ending, I WAS SOBBING WITH HAPPINESS! 
            
            SHARJEENA was in such a tender moment of her life, they had JUST moved, he had JUST lost his life and now he’s abandoned her. I hated ppl saying that she was just crying, she needed support, and he was her pillar of support, she was never open and free like that with Anyone else. 
            
            She loved him so much! 
            
            I MISS THEM I FEEL SO EMPTY!!!!

@Aax_axxx IDK GIRL SALMAN FELT TOO INNOCENT TO BE WITH SOMEONE LIKE RUBAB 
            
            
            AND YES GOOD THING THEY DIDNT MESS IT UP OR THERE WOULDVE BEEN WAR FR 
            
            I FELT SO BAD FOR MUSTAFA WHEN ALL THE WRONGS HIS PARENTS DID AND HOW HE FELT WERE EXPLAINED 
            
            HONESTLY, I THOUGHT THE MOTHER IS GOING TO LET HIM BACK IN RIGHT AWAY I DONT EXPECT ANY BETTER FROM HER 
            
            
            YES YES YES SHARJEENA IS SUCH A GREEN FLAG EVERYONE TALKS ABOUT HOW GOOD MUSTAFA IS ETC ETC. BUT SHARJEENA LOVES HIM SO MUCH!!! AND HAS ALWAYS STOOD BY HIS SIDE AND GAVE HIM HOPE ALL THE TIME AND- SHES JUST SO GOOD, JUST SAW A POST A FEW DAYS AGO ABOUT HOW SHE JUST KEEPS CRYING AND BASICALLY PEOPLE WERE TRASH TALKING HER AND IT MADE ME SO MAD, SHE'S GOING THROUGH STUFF AND SHE WAS PREGNANT, OF COURSE SHE WAS CRYING THERE'S NOTHING WRONG WITH IT 

@Herscherr_of_Void 
            
            I CANT EXPLAIN WHY BUT I THIBK SALMAN AND RUBAB EOULD HAVE BEEN A CUTR COUPLE. 
            
            
            YES THE STICKY NOTESSSDSDD 
            
            O MY 
            
            MY HEART IS SO FULLL!!!
            
            
            I LOVED TGE RNFIBG SO GLAD THAT THEY DIDBR MESS IT UP! 
            
            WHEN MUSTAFA IS CRYIBG IN FRIBT OF THEM, TELLIBG THEM HOW THEY NADE HIM LIKE THIS ABD NONE IF HIS PAREBTS MOVED TO COMFORT HIM, CAUSE WHY WOULD THEY AFTER RIDICULONG HIM HIS WHOLE LOFE! 
            
            I WANTED ADEEEL DEAD. Deep down we know the mothers going to let him back into their house.
            
            
            AND EVEN THO THEY WERE MAD AT EACH OTHER SHARJEENA NEVER LET MUSTAFA CALL HIMSELF A LOSER 
            
            THEIR HOME IS SO CUTEEEE IDC WHAT SHARJEENAS DAD WAS COMLAINIBG ABOUT!