Hetvi Bhatt

Hey, sorry for posting it here but do try to read this story and vote comments 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/361296793?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=WhiteBird32

https://www.wattpad.com/1469854708/paragraph/aefcc66e7e59104be4d81e015cffec61/comment/1469854708_aefcc66e7e59104be4d81e015cffec61_1724402368_06c85d8bc4
          
          Sorry for the inconvenience but kindly read my book and comment if you like the book

Heyyy<3
          
          I'm writing a new book called promises, im kind of new to this writting thing and I've only posted a few chapters soo would you take a look at my book and tell me is it's somethings missing or if I need to add anything to it and how you feel about my writing if it's terrible could you please tell me what I should to to improve it as I really enjoyed writting the few chapters and I really enjoyed writting it... So if you do have the time would you please check it out and if you did like the book can you vote on all the chapters and also follow me I'll also follow you back 
          
          Thanks for your time loveee<3