HewoEwo

I wish I could edit other people's stories, not in a joking way, but correcting grammar. Without doing it in the comments, and then having it feel rude...

HewoEwo

My books so far...are...idk just read them and tell me your feedback please thanks

IamStarfly

Okay, so.. um... I think the writing could use a little help, and also maybe try writing it out before and read it to yourself?
            I am also kind of worried that Silverkit might turn out to be a bit of a Mary Sue
            Hope this helps!
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