HewoEwo

I wish I could edit other people's stories, not in a joking way, but correcting grammar. Without doing it in the comments, and then having it feel rude...

HewoEwo

I need help with names for the “mystery” person in my latest book, they’re going to be a male, age 16... also I need feedback on any of my books, I am under editing on all of them. Also I need ideas for the Warriors Book I’m doing. Thanks

HewoEwo

My books so far...are...idk just read them and tell me your feedback please thanks

HewoEwo

*thx
• Reply

HewoEwo

Kay thanx
• Reply

IamStarfly

Okay, so.. um... I think the writing could use a little help, and also maybe try writing it out before and read it to yourself?
            I am also kind of worried that Silverkit might turn out to be a bit of a Mary Sue
            Hope this helps!
• Reply