hi, 

I'm writing this book called Almond High school. It is my first book, and I want it to be the best that I can write so I'm always open to constructive criticism. Pls check it out (just the first chapter and see if you like it.).

If you want constructive criticism, on your book, dm me, I gotchu. I only willing to do 5 chapters a book, though. Unless... I really like your book. There's no payment, I just like to edit other people's work when I have a writer's block.