If I were to explain to you what Thy, Thee, Thou, ect mean would you change your "Male Hunter of Artemis" series so that it actually is proper grammer, because you use them very wrong. For example just because those words are used does not mean that I, mine, my, and me, are not used. This is just one example, I can explain what they are and where to use what but I would want to know it would actually matter before I go to the effort of explaining where they are appropriate and where they are not.