@HeyYanFei I haven't read your story for quite a long time now, so I can't say much. But, if you feel like there's need to rewrite the story, it's up to your decision, whether changing the characters, scenario, plots, for much better flow of the story, it's your book, so you can do anything to it. I Hope I can read more of your story, it's one of my favourite in the past. Good Luck!