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updated "The life noone wanted" ep 3 :) 
          comment of there is any wrong spelling and tell me where so I can fix it. you an of course tell me any ideas what's gonna happen next and what it is that stops them. plz no childish ideas...(like an alien or yourself coming from no where into the story)

Hi ... He passed to greet and invite you to read my novel http://w.tt/1lixYyi . Thousand thanks! Really thank you

published chapter 2- "the life noine ever wanted" hope you like it! and plz comment if you want of what you think about it or if I need to change a Lil for the next chapter

published out chapter 1 - the life noone ever wanted type comments of what you think of chapter 1 if you liked it or if there should be changes that I have to think about for my next chapter...

                     ❕Stories so far❕
          
          - The life no one ever wanted (ongoing)
          - broken heart (ongoing)