Love your work but forget the betrayed stuff its over used and its all the exact same bio for a book "Ash returns from said place only to find friends and family telling hin to wuit and give up after so and so amount of time he returns and proves himself"
Eh he he it's been like a month since my last update. Sorry I've been swamped with homework, tests, projects, and school in general. The next chapter should be out before Christmas. Sorry once again.