4xmoodygirl

Hey, is your native language Hindi?

HiddenHeartlines

@4xmoodygirl thankyou for your advice I'll surely try to do that from the next chs
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4xmoodygirl

@4xmoodygirl then just a small piece of advice from a small writer, kindly use Hindi completely, for example, you used in Chapter one,"Uski elder sister" or "timid, strong aur roaring lioness thi" like that, so  I'm saying not to point out flaws, but to grow, together 
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