Anum15

Hi
          
          If you have a bit of free time, could you please check out my book "A surprise that changed her life" and leave your comments and votes on it too. It'd be awesome if you decided to do that. New chapter is posted every Saturday. 
          
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Anum15

@Anum15  Ah yes, now that is some real criticism. Thank you. I've been thinking the same thing and will soon do something about it. If you still decide to read the story, I'd be looking forward to your comments so that I can make it better. ☺☺☺
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HighOnSkittles13

@Anum15 I outright critisize books on wattpad if nessacary . Not for hate but improvement. I personal find the description of your book to be extermely clinche and cringey. I felt like i was reading a copied and pasted description off another one of those"Shes an innocient nerd hes a dangerous bad boy. She just wants to graduate unoticed blah blah blah." Wattpad is infested with those books and most of them are trashy. I think u should change the description up a little bit, make it special and unique.
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cirenithegenie

este mensaje puede ser ofensivo 
(This is like a montage of big things that happened up to chapter 16 but there's a lot more detail in everything that happens obvs lol)so lord Dalgliesh tries making lilly go on a walk with her to basically kidnap her but her suitor comes to talk to her so lord D leaves and the suitor ends up proposing to her! She's shocked and just goes with it idk why ?! So her aunt and family hear the news and are happy (I guess) and Mr. Ambrose doesn't show up until a chapter or two later and when Lilly tells him about the engagement YOU WOULD THINK HE'D ACT JEALOUS BUT HE DOESNT  he's just like congrats now get back to work. Lilly tries everything she can to leave the country and tries suggesting things to go on another trip I.e. South America to look for gold but Mr. Ambrose is like nah. he's lowkey jealous bc he ends up getting rid of Mr. Fitzgerald (her fiancé) bc he suddenly disappears just like her last suitor in the first book. Oh yeah shit with Ella and Edmund happens too. They kiss. But there's more complication to that kiss but anyways after those chapters there's a chapter where you meet the pink letter lady!! And it turns out to be rikkards mom! So in that chapter we got a little bit more info on his background cuz Lilly put her ear up against the door to listen to their convo . Then after him speaking to his mom he ends up telling Lilly to meet him at the docks the following morning bc they are in fact leaving to South America. And chapter 15 is about them getting on the ship and chapter 16 is about them sailing and them ending up in Argentina about to blow up the coastal guard ships cuz Mr. Ambrose doesn't want to pay the tax fee for selling goods

HighOnSkittles13

I LOVE YOUS SO MUCH FOR THIS THANK YOU THANK YOU !!
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AvalonRoyce

I like your username.

AvalonRoyce

Oh thank you! I'm really happy to hear that. :)
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HighOnSkittles13

@ArabiaFelix thank you :D and i like your daughters of  the desert story
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Ruechari

So excited you've decided to read my novel From the Ashes! Thank you so much for taking the time to vote! It means a great deal to me! (By the way so love your profile name!!!)

Ruechari

Thanks a bunch!  :  )
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HighOnSkittles13

@Ruechari it my pleasure in the one who gets to read a wonderful book. Can't wait to finish it! :)
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