Highkeyonfleek

Follow @mystery_girl0204 and read her books yall

mixeddollrria

Your Story Has Good Potential ( The First One Im Reading, Adopted By August ) But A Few Tips I Know/Learned, 
          
          Space Out The Dialogue Like The Conversations & The Thoughts. Put The Conversations In Quotations Or Italics Or Something  ( W/e Is Your Style ) 
          
          Go Into More Details Too. Like Don't Be Brief W/ The Thoughts of The Characters
          
          Make The Chapters Longer 
          
          Correct The Grammar/Spelling & Some Words Shouldn't Be Shortened So Readers Can Understand. 
          
          Don't Put Me & ___ The Characters Name As Convo, 
          
          Example :
          Me : Hey
          Him : Hi.
          
          You Know? 
          Lmk If You Want Anymore Tips. Im Only Pointing Out What I Noticed.
          
          Hope You Didn't Mind. 
          
          I'll Continue Reading Tho.. & Ill Be Back Lol. 

Highkeyonfleek

@mixeddollrria Thanks..I appreciate the help
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Highkeyonfleek

I'm literally crying right now because of my books population and the feedback I'm getting on all my books and especially I got adopted by August Alsina with over 1000 views but the only thing is how do you get a thousand views and like 40 something likes or votes. The only thing I want is a little bit more comments and so thank you guys.