lulimarttule

Hi! I’m Luli!
          
          I noticed you’re a Hermione Granger fan and that you’ve put together such an amazing reading list. I’m still new to Wattpad, so I’m trying to get my story in front of readers who might enjoy it.
          
          If you’re interested, I’d love for you to check it out:
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/399384812-in-silence-i-wither-hermione-granger
          
          Thanks so much for taking the time to read this, and I hope you have a lovely day!

HinataShoyo5678

@lulimarttule Woahhh okkawyyy let me check it our
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lulimarttule

yoyoyoyoyoyyo!!!!!
            I thought about what you said. And I'v been racking by brain to understand how to show the readers that, at the end of the day, this story is a hermione/oc love story, even though the first chapters and probably the first book is about getting to know our protagonist, because she's someone no one knows yet. And because her story is SO damn rich. So. I did something. Go check the new prologue and tell me what you think...
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HinataShoyo5678

I love your writing to be honest is long and detailed, but rare too because this is probably one of the stories i’ve read where their oc doesn’t have that much of connection to the golden trio but i think its okay for now just hoping that they would interact more and i don’t mind with the story if the oc shes interesting too so just keep going with your flow you don’t have to rush it much but i would still suggest more interactions with hermione and oc because people crave for that attention. I can recommend slow burn with tension in it ya know
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