Omg no problem hon! Your story has a really interesting and unique plot, and the story is really well-put together! I look forward to reading the chapters to come ;)
@AsheDragon_Warrior Aww I feel you gurl! Don't stress too much about whether or not you think the writing is good. What really matters is if your enjoying yourself! ☆*:.。.o(≧▽≦)o.。.:*☆