I have a suggestion for your story … hear this … the reader is having fun on her date with Camilo … what he doesn’t know is … she has asthma … it starts get late and he races her back to casita and she starts having an asthma attack and hyperventilates and freaks out … he becomes concerned and takes her back to his room to comfort her and takes care of her with her asthma saying phrases such as deep breathing, it’s ok, and she tells him to find her inhaler and she uses it in front of him. Once she becomes stable she cries and tells him the truth and they decide to skip dinner for her to rest … EHHH