GalacticWolf2

Hey, your story overall! You shouldn't just fouscs on two or more perspectives in a chapter. Have like from example, have Katsuki's perspective more if he's your main character if not whoever your main character is you should do that more often then other characters. For example 
          
          Example: I watched as the villains showed me the ties in bound. (Izuku) 
          Expamle: I was angry at how I could be so dumb as to tell him to take a swan dive off the roof and end it. He better not have, that damn Deku!(Katsuki) 
          This is a example of the main characters so whoever it is should be the person who's perspective needs to show up more

GalacticWolf2

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Hodgeinator

@GalacticWolf2 I officially have part 2 out on my story come check it out when you get a chance
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Hodgeinator

@GalacticWolf2 hello check out my latest story and share it around if you don't mind, it is only 1 chapter, how bad can it be? Don't be shy 
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