IDontWritelJustRead

hi! my friend recently just made a wilbur soot story and it would be radical if you could go give it some feedback and tell me what you think so far .
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/267100398?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=library&wp_uname=g0th1ka&wp_originator=Zm5kDcht0g84Tk1w%2BMUSHcbKT6FhgToMTz%2B6rnawPBC53K6S4uauiPghyNmpxjWYeZgnqROj8PKJx804LEN4LPi9JObcS4Yk8HvanSHNOxXyu5rNgLt%2FDWKRDb9y3zAV