We would like to say something.
If there are minor grammar errors in a book, ignore them. Those really discourage an author.
Second, kindly read the full thing before pointing out something incorrect. We both probably have enough sex education to write a realistic oneshot. Criticism is highly appreciated, but not when it's destructive.
Third, since we weren't getting anymore requests, we're coming up with our own.
Spoiler: It's gonna be a blast ;)
~Samzu