HoldOnPainEnds98

Hello everybodyyyy!!!! The new version of "Purpose" is finally being published on Wattpad, to new readers: "Enjoy!!!" to old ones "You'll love this version even more!!" https://www.wattpad.com/story/117083321

luxiferase

Hi. if you have time, can you check out my book Loving Mayhem? :)
          I will appreciate your opinion.
          though I will understand if you don't 'cause it's not a werewolf book. Thank you. :)

HoldOnPainEnds98

@ lucferase  no worries, I read almost everything except horror, poetry and LGBT 
            I have quite a few requests in line, but as soon as I'll read them all I'll read yours
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gayliete

hey can you please check out my story : i spy & maybe read it! it would mean a lot ❤️ xoxo bella :: have a great day!

HoldOnPainEnds98

@ blissfulechoes  Hey, I read I Spy and I think that you should make that main character a little more social, put more dialogue, don't spend to many sentences on details (I'm not saying that details are a no no, I'm just saying to.. shorten the details or don't put too many, readers could get bored and you should let them imagine the surrounding of the character... just explain the important things and leave the rest to the reader's imagination), but all in all it's a good story,  with a little work it could even turn amazing... And remember, that is just my opinion, other people might think the opposite
            Good luck with the story and have a great day too
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