@HollyBarnes393
Hello! I'm glad I found you here in Wattpad World! You are a fantastic writer! Currently in middle of Broken Dragon & just to say I can't stop reading it. When I really get into the story I comment A LOT but don't mean disrespect to you or your work! It means your story has drawn me into it I can't stay quiet! Yes, it's THAT GOOD!!! Thank you for sharing your talent! <3
I am spending some time to revisit some older work, I do my own proofreading, which is tricky as you always write what you think you wrote, leaving some time before finishing work and delving in to reread it, means I see some mistakes more easily. That is why some works are published at different dates.
Hope this makes sense.
@PageTurner702 I am not sure how I would go about just releasing it to you, but if you ever spot mistakes, please point them out, I write on my phone and my fingers move so fast I always make mistakes, sometimes just through auto correct, I try to catch them but I don’t think I ever get them all, even on the third of fourth read
@HollyBarnes393 If you are ever interested in having a proofreader, I enthusiastically volunteer♀️
@HollyBarnes393 makes total sense! That time in between writing and proofing is like cleansing your mental pallet
Is there going to be a breeds part 3?
@Midwesternmama bless you that’s so sweet of you, I do try to stay away from the normal tropes you get, you must tell me what you think of meeting Maria when it’s complete, I am hoping to finish it this weekend. Xx
I have read all but one. Loved Motorbikes and Madness! Great plot, flows well and is unique
@Midwesternmama that’s so kind of you, honestly the most recent one that I am finishing in the next few days is a break from the norm for me, and I struggled with it’s present present tense and non omega subject matter. But I will see what people think of it. But I think you will like the others, they are slightly slower burns but once the heat starts it’s just as spicy ️
Heyy, sorry to drop in but I have a book I think you'll love. It's called The Ice Princess and is an amazing fantasy novel with a touch of romance and some pretty cool twists and turns. I'd really love it if you gave this book a chance. It is a completed story which took a lot of time, effort, and love to create, so, give it a go and let me know how it is <3
Here is the link xx
https://www.wattpad.com/story/194145779-the-ice-princess-complete-✔%EF%B8%8F
Seem to have completely lost a book I was half way through. - not sure why this has happened - I will rewrite den of sin when I am in the mood to write it- it’s quite upsetting to loose nearly two thirds of a book and have no idea why. But I have a new book in my head so am going to write that instead and will return to den of sin when I am ready.
I'm so sorry, @@HollyBarnes393! For how disappointed that I am to see it's missing, your disappointment must be 100 times that. I hope your other books are backed up somewhere and that this one can somehow be retrieved.
@HollyBarnes393 I have tried to look up Den of Sin and your username here and I’m not getting anything. I even checked with your other works you have here to see if I can get something to pop up. I have to have a link to try and help you out. So I wasn’t sure if maybe this has been deleted for some time or if you go by a different author name. Idk. I’m more than happy to help and look but I need something that would help bring it up and right now I don’t have anything that’s working
Holly!!! Working on anything new lately (she asks eagerly but not impatiently)? I love everything you've published on here!
I am going to finish a book ‘Ophelia’ soon then I have a new one already mapped out which is a bit different but am sure you will like for it’s kink x
Someone can recommend some books like Breeds please
Very much enjoying your work with Breeds. Wondering if you'd consider adding a tag or tw for noncon? It can be normal for a person's body to respond during rape, but that in itself shouldn't bring into question the consensuality of the act.
Hi guys new book out, slightly lighter than my
Last but just as spicey. I like this a little more I think, it’s part one of a duet. Enjoy the Outlanders Alphas xx
I understand how you would feel that if you don’t read to the end- the end explains a lot. But I will take your criticism on board and next time I write I won’t leave it till the end to Join the dots. I may even go in and rewrite this one. I guess because in my head I know where it’s going I always see the connection - but part of the book was the complete change of place from the first, and how she met Gabriel, who was mentioned several times in the first. But as I have said all comment are useful and need taking on board , plus rereading chapters after your comments made me realise how it needs more proof reading it had so much, but obviously not enough ☺️
@HollyBarnes393 I just read the first in this duet and started the second. I am absolutely lost. Is the 2nd one not a continuation of the first? I love your writing, but the story no longer makes any sense to me. The description doesn't seem to support a continuation of the first.
Part 2 completed - a new omegaverse in the process coming soon