HollyBarnes393

I am spending some time to revisit some older work, I do my own proofreading, which is tricky as you always write what you think you wrote, leaving some time before finishing work and delving in to reread it, means I see some mistakes more easily. That is why some works are published at different dates. 
          	
          	Hope this makes sense.

HollyBarnes393

@PageTurner702 I am not sure how I would go about just releasing it to you, but if you ever spot mistakes, please point them out, I write on my phone and my fingers move so fast I always make mistakes, sometimes just through auto correct, I try to catch them but I don’t think I ever get them all, even on the third of fourth read
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PageTurner702

@HollyBarnes393 If you are ever interested in having a proofreader, I enthusiastically volunteer‍♀️
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PageTurner702

@HollyBarnes393 makes total sense! That time in between writing and proofing is like cleansing your mental pallet
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HollyBarnes393

I am spending some time to revisit some older work, I do my own proofreading, which is tricky as you always write what you think you wrote, leaving some time before finishing work and delving in to reread it, means I see some mistakes more easily. That is why some works are published at different dates. 
          
          Hope this makes sense.

HollyBarnes393

@PageTurner702 I am not sure how I would go about just releasing it to you, but if you ever spot mistakes, please point them out, I write on my phone and my fingers move so fast I always make mistakes, sometimes just through auto correct, I try to catch them but I don’t think I ever get them all, even on the third of fourth read
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PageTurner702

@HollyBarnes393 If you are ever interested in having a proofreader, I enthusiastically volunteer‍♀️
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PageTurner702

@HollyBarnes393 makes total sense! That time in between writing and proofing is like cleansing your mental pallet
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Midwesternmama

Is there going to be a breeds part 3?

HollyBarnes393

@Midwesternmama bless you that’s so sweet of you, I do try to stay away from the normal tropes you get,  you must  tell me what you think of meeting Maria when it’s complete, I am hoping to finish it this weekend. Xx
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Midwesternmama

I have read all but one. Loved Motorbikes and Madness! Great plot, flows well and is unique
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HollyBarnes393

@Midwesternmama that’s so kind of you, honestly the most recent one that I am finishing in the next few days is a break from the norm for me, and I struggled with it’s present present tense and non omega subject matter. But I will see what people think of it. But I think you will like the others, they are slightly slower burns but once the heat starts it’s just as spicy ️
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19174-jerusha

Heyy, sorry to drop in but I have a book I think you'll love. It's called The Ice Princess and is an amazing fantasy novel with a touch of romance and some pretty cool twists and turns. I'd really love it if you gave this book a chance. It is a completed story which took a lot of time, effort, and love to create, so, give it a go and let me know how it is <3 
          
          Here is the link xx
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/194145779-the-ice-princess-complete-✔%EF%B8%8F

HollyBarnes393

Seem to have completely lost a book I was half way through. - not sure why this has happened - I will rewrite den of sin when I am in the mood to write it- it’s quite upsetting to loose nearly two thirds of a book and have no idea why. But I have a new book in my head so am going to write that instead and will return to den of sin when I am ready.

HollyBarnes393

@PageTurner702 thank you for looking for me xx
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PageTurner702

I'm so sorry, @@HollyBarnes393! For how disappointed that I am to see it's missing, your disappointment must be 100 times that. I hope your other books are backed up somewhere and that this one can somehow be retrieved.
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GeeLooB

@HollyBarnes393 I have tried to look up Den of Sin and your username here and I’m not getting anything. I even checked with your other works you have here to see if I can get something to pop up. I have to have a link to try and help you out. So I wasn’t sure if maybe this has been deleted for some time or if you go by a different author name. Idk. I’m more than happy to help and look but I need something that would help bring it up and right now I don’t have anything that’s working
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PageTurner702

Holly!!! Working on anything new lately (she asks eagerly but not impatiently)? I love everything you've published on here!

PageTurner702

@HollyBarnes393 can't wait!
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HollyBarnes393

I am going to finish a book ‘Ophelia’ soon then I have a new one already mapped out which is a bit different but am sure you will like for it’s kink x
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tnmn85

Very much enjoying your work with Breeds. Wondering if you'd consider adding a tag or tw for noncon? It can be normal for a person's body to respond during rape, but that in itself shouldn't bring into question the consensuality of the act.

HollyBarnes393

Will take this into account and may change my tags - thank you ☺️
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HollyBarnes393

Hi guys new book out, slightly lighter than my
          Last but just as spicey.  I like this a little more I think, it’s part one of a duet. Enjoy  the Outlanders Alphas  xx

HollyBarnes393

I understand how you would feel that if you don’t read to the end- the end explains a lot. But I will take your criticism on board and next time I write I won’t leave it till the end to  Join the dots. I may even go in and rewrite this one. I guess because in my head I know where it’s going I always see the connection - but part of the book was the complete change of place from the first, and how she met Gabriel, who was mentioned several times in the first.   But as I have said all comment are useful and need taking on board , plus rereading chapters after your comments made me realise how it needs more proof reading  it had so much, but obviously not enough ☺️
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HeatherIotte

@HollyBarnes393 
            I just read the first in this duet and started the second. I am absolutely lost. Is the 2nd one not a continuation of the first? I love your writing, but the story no longer makes any sense to me. The description doesn't seem to support a continuation of the first.
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