I wish you have a proofreader to check your story before you publish it. I apologize but this not just a criticism but rather an encouragement for you to be a better writer. I like your stories but honestly it is so distracting and annoying reading your books with lots of errors, spelling mostly, and I wonder if English is your first language. Its just painful reading words that were spelled incorrectly and wrong tenses. Please have it proofread before publishing it..did you review and edit it before publishing it? I hope you will take this to heart and improve your writing...goodluck!