Homer_

@jespah Haha. Right now I set up a personal account to get the hang of things, and i will set up an author account eventually

Homer_

Also, I will be doing seasons of the "Lens" haiku project instead of having it in one giant book (Makes things easier to manage). The first ten haikus of season 2 will be out on August 18th and I will be posting once again from then on. Haiku #224 will be the final haiku for the season. 
          
          Also, I will be uploading a new poem sometime soon. I don't know when, but I'll let you guys know. 
          
          I hope everything will be better from here on out. For the both of us!

jespah

Thank you for voting for The Social Media Guide agin! :)

jespah

@Homer_ Oh, cool. I've been playing with it a lot more lately. There seems to be great love for retro Juan Ortiz Star Trek posters.
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Homer_

Your welcome. I actually decided to get a Pinterest account because of your book!
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weary_

(Not to be weird or anything but I wrote a haiku. I've never actually written a haiku before and wanted an opinion from someone that knows what they're doing. Derp.) 
          
          Beauty passes by
          I forget to say hello
          now I am alone

Homer_

Your welcome
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weary_

Wow, thank you! That helps a lot. I'm not going to steal your haiku though, so don't worry. And thanks also for following me Xx
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Homer_

How touching <3, This is actually the first time that I am seriously writing haikus.  I really like how clear the message of your haiku is, but it lacks sensory information like touch, sight, taste, hearing. The first rule of creative is to show don't tell.
            
            Maybe something more like this
            
            Her soft hair floats, flows
            Hello booms in, mute outside:
             Now I am alone
            
            Hope this helps!
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iRoyal_Beauty

boo! /.\

iRoyal_Beauty

sorta im writing the next part now lol
            idk if i should straight tell his story or wait and let him slowly tell her idk :/
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Homer_

Has your writer's block faded out yet?
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