Homer_
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@jespah Haha. Right now I set up a personal account to get the hang of things, and i will set up an author account eventually
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Also, I will be doing seasons of the "Lens" haiku project instead of having it in one giant book (Makes things easier to manage). The first ten haikus of season 2 will be out on August 18th and I will be posting once again from then on. Haiku #224 will be the final haiku for the season. Also, I will be uploading a new poem sometime soon. I don't know when, but I'll let you guys know. I hope everything will be better from here on out. For the both of us!
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Thank you for voting for The Social Media Guide agin! :)
jespah
@Homer_ Oh, cool. I've been playing with it a lot more lately. There seems to be great love for retro Juan Ortiz Star Trek posters.
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DeadNightBird
Hey, thanks for suggesting me some of your stories. Right now my reading list is quite loaded, but I'll make sure to come back and check them out once I've got a free second. :)
jespah
Thank you for voting for the Social Media Guide! :)
Peculiarities
I forgot all the rules about haikus...
Here to saying thanks
for reading my new book
and giving a (generous) vote
Oh my god I suck....
weary_
(Not to be weird or anything but I wrote a haiku. I've never actually written a haiku before and wanted an opinion from someone that knows what they're doing. Derp.)
Beauty passes by
I forget to say hello
now I am alone
weary_
Wow, thank you! That helps a lot. I'm not going to steal your haiku though, so don't worry. And thanks also for following me Xx
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Homer_
How touching <3, This is actually the first time that I am seriously writing haikus. I really like how clear the message of your haiku is, but it lacks sensory information like touch, sight, taste, hearing. The first rule of creative is to show don't tell.
Maybe something more like this
Her soft hair floats, flows
Hello booms in, mute outside:
Now I am alone
Hope this helps!
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Couzay
Perceptions crumble
Divide between hot and not
Vanity is king
Peculiarities
Thanks for following! And thanks for the comments, I love them! Anyway, so this is Meth, and I was wondering what should I call you since you have so many names, and all very special.
iRoyal_Beauty
boo! /.\
iRoyal_Beauty
sorta im writing the next part now lol
idk if i should straight tell his story or wait and let him slowly tell her idk :/
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