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I started Under Quiet Skies, and the premise caught me because it feels like both characters are trying to build a life while carrying something they can’t fully escape. I like when romance has that quiet suspense underneath instead of everything being explained too soon. In my own story, Sophie has only just stepped into a new city and into Marco’s world, so I’m trying to keep the first connection subtle. When you write romantic suspense, how do you decide how much mystery to reveal early and how much to leave in the background?

Author_without

Yes, that makes sense, thank you for taking the time for me, I wish you as much inspiration as possible and I look forward to updates from you ❤
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@Author_without Thank you fro giving Under Quiet Skies a chance.✨
            
            
            For me, I try not to think about mystery as something I have to constantly hide from the reader. I focus more on the characters first. I let them live their lives, build relationships, make mistakes, and react to situations naturally. The mystery is there, but it stays in the background until the story reaches a point where revealing it feels earned. Yeah that’s the term, earned and not spoon fed.
            
            When I'm writing romantic suspense, I usually reveal enough to create questions, but not enough to answer them. I want readers to feel that something is off or unresolved without immediately knowing what it is.
            
            From what you shared about Sophie and Marco, from a reader’s POV,  I'd enjoy seeing their connection develop naturally while letting the bigger questions linger in the background for a while.
            
            
            I hope this helps.
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