Honormellow84

Now the 3rd book is finished. Be awhile before I start posting book 4. So until the enjoy what I've made so far.

otakufancyfanstudent

Hay!! Nice to hear ya!!! Have a good day. Bit of a read but good content and smooth delivery. Easy to imagine the events. But takes time to get throw each chapter.

Honormellow84

@otakufancyfanstudent
            Yeah, it's a thick read. And this is after thinning out the scene describing and keeping things flowing. Keep any explanations meaningful, or a way to slow something down while still staying in the same frame. The other thing I do is read out the text, make sure I got the punctuation right. Don't want another shooting panda on the loose.
            And take your time when reading this. The 4th book is gonna be awhile before it's finished.
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