HopelessDreamer24

Chapter One of The Supremacy has been uploaded! 
          	
          	Enjoy, and remember to let me know what you all think! :) 

HopelessDreamer24

So... The Conscience Slaves has now been updated! 
          I'm leaving the original version on here, but you'll find my rewrite titled "The Conscience Slaves: Book One (Rewrite)" -  as exciting news... The Conscience Slaves is now set to become a trilogy. 
          
          I'd love to hear from you all to see if you like the new spin on things. Also prepare to be able to piece a lot more of my characters' stories together with my all new prologue. 
          
          Hope you like it!

HopelessDreamer24

@Renesseme4356 of course!  I'm really going to put my all into it. Doing chapter one at the moment and it's going to be very different.  I just hope people don't hate me for changing it! 
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Renesseme4356

@HopelessDreamer24 Yay! You took what I said into consideration :) you have my full support!!
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HopelessDreamer24

Ok, so probably what you've all been waiting for me to say but I am now beginning to edit The Conscience Slaves. I'm somewhat excited but more nervous about returning to it because I have no idea how to write the rest of it or what's going to happen.  So we will see how this goes. I hope you all continue to enjoy it, and please always let me know what you think and leave me constructive criticism. :) 
          
          Thank you all for reading this annoying essay! 

HopelessDreamer24

Hey everyone, 
          
          Just wanted to say I've received all your messages about critiquing your work and I will get back to you all shortly. Unfortunately I start work  ten minutes ago... (I'm always late ) and have a 16 hour day. 
          But I will get back to you as soon as I can! 
          
          Speak soon, 
          
          I

HopelessDreamer24

So the prologue of The Supremacy has finally made it out there. I'm really going to try and update as regularly as I can... which probably isn't very regularly. 
          
          Please please give the prologue a read and let me know what you think. I look forward to hearing from everyone. :)