Hey o I found ur profile, I read ur fan fic, I like it. But being honest it could use a bit of work, just a little advice :)
Also do you think u could check out Beyond My Reach my Andy Biersack fan fiction?
@onemorelight- my fanfic definitely needs work, but it's my first proper one that I haven't given up on after the first channel so I'm hoping to get better. I'll definitely check out beyond my reach