HorrificSight

Y'all should read The Lady and the Dresses

JustAnotherFan18

I saw you're post about not reading anything about vampire and werewolves and that you prefer realistic romance. Well luckily for the both of us, I need a critique from some experienced, and you like realistic love story where a relationship actually develops. The only thing slightly unrealistic is the chain of events upon how they meet, but I assure you, I try to keep this novel down to earth as much as possible through colloquialism. Anyways, I'm in dire need of a critique, PLEASE HELP ME. The story is called "My Dear Camilla"
          
           http://www.wattpad.com/story/6642283-my-dear-camilla-a-romantic-fanfiction