Horus1922
Hey, sorry. I forgot about this. You're doing great so far. I have a question though. Why did you suddenly switch from first person to second in the middle of the second chapter? The crust chapter and first part of the second are in first person. Also, I'm not trying to be rude here, and understand I don't look for mistakes, it's just how I am. There are some little grammar mistakes and I was wondering if you cared to know about them?