Haley

Hey Haley~~Thanx for adding "Crissa's Mate" to your list. I like what your doing with "All I Have"--my only suggestion for you to get more readers and make it continue as a "page-turner" is to "sexx-it-up" a bit.  The techinique to work on is 
           a palpable description both physical and emotion sensations of your ptinciple characters. And remember, anticipation of sex is even stonger than getting it--in fiction (not alsways in life) :)
          As a small tutorial of what I'm sharing with you,  read my short story "A Walk in the Countryside." And let me know what you think. 
          Enjoy. (Best to read Part 4 while home alone . . .)
          ~~Califia
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/16999941-a-walk-in-the-countryside

Thanks for voting on Sun Child :)

Thanks for the follow! (:

HI, Haley! Thank you so much for supporting me! I hope that you liked my stories! :)

Thank you for voting for my book!

Are you gonna update all I have soon. I really enjoy it 

@Jariana_Jiley_Lover  You're welcome :)

Thanks 4 the follow