Hridith Sudev

Please read my first poem mate and do comment and vote how it is and what improvements can help me move further? Thx for your guidance... :)

Please add me too in your journey mate, as we both can be vompanions and supporters in this world of poetry.. Can you?? 
          With love,
          Aayush

Thanks for adding I'm a cyborg's pet to your reading list. Ok this might sound a little strange but we are new authors and still get a thrill every time someone finds us