Hscribbles

Happy Makara Sankranthi peeps✨

Hscribbles

Looking for an emotional rollercoaster ride of a book?
          Here it is! This is a best choice to experience love,understanding,
          marriage and growing together! 
          The FemaleLead Farzeen definitely captures your heart with her kindness and beauty.
          Our introverted Mudassir has my heart!
          
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/379890439?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=Hscribbles

lee-pretty-know

Hey there, i'm your new reader.. 
          
          As you said in your note that you wouldn't mind some suggestions about your work.. I would like to help you with kinda polishing your story. 
          
          Although the story, characters and plot is well designed i think you should edit a bit of writing style. 
          
          To make your writing more effective and pretty. Use commas when you add multiple things in just one sentence , break the big paragraphs and add space in them so it doesn't make the reader annoyed , and yeah make sure you leave author note in a way you aren't shown like a beginner (write author note short and just bubbly. Greet readers or just give a reaction on chapter. To engage readers , you can even have a short question so you can convey with them) 
          
          
          Yeah thats all.. Hoping this wouldn't annoy you. I don't really read hetero couple story but i love this storyline now. 

Hscribbles

Heyyy thanks a lot!!
            Your suggestions are more helpful and I will definitely consider them.
            Please continue reading!!
            
            And no you are not annoying me my friend!
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