Okay... after a few final final draft edits, I think I'm finally going to have to walk away from, and be okay with The Dark Things Beneath, my ONC entry (cause I think I could honestly keep editing on this thing forever!) I many add an epilogue later, but that will have to remain to be seen.
So, if you read it either yesterday or earlier today, you might wanna give it another look, cause I'm feeling better about a lot of it now (at least the last two chapters, which have a fair amount of stuff added in to make things make a little more sense!)
Thanks again for giving it a look, if you're interested! I'm very proud of everything I was able to do on wrapping this one up!