@Hurt_Context
Actually i am an concept artist with creative mind and i am working with many authors. Most of the authors appericiate my work and get positive response from readers and book buyers. I have a keen experience in it as you said you rewritten your story so i want to suggest you that you also add some illustration artwork in your story and i learn this tactic from many professional authors they said that you have to grab readers attention and attracts them by your writing skills as well as artworks.
So the idea of illustration is:
The illustration for New Beginnings at the Valley School captures a heartwarming moment in the bustling school cafeteria, where Scar and Grian’s budding friendship takes center stage. Scar sits nervously at the edge of a crowded table, his green eyes filled with quiet curiosity, while Grian leans toward him with an animated grin, his colorful macaw-like wings partially spread in excitement. Around them, the cafeteria buzzes with students of all kinds—an Ice Elf with silver hair, a Sprite with pink wings, and an Undead girl with orange hair—each chatting, laughing, or enjoying their meal. Grian’s wing casually draped over Scar’s shoulder symbolizes the comfort and warmth of their growing bond, while the bright and lively backdrop of school life, with Avians fluttering above and colorful posters on the walls, sets a hopeful and inviting tone. The scene beautifully reflects the joy of finding acceptance in a diverse world and the excitement of starting something new, all through the lens of friendship and self-discovery.
I hope you like the idea if you want any changes so i can also do it and i can also make this illustration for your story as i told i am an experienced artist so if you are interested so kindly show me your interest so i share my recent work with you .
