rveleva
Hi! I hope you're having a great day :) I just wanted to ask if you'd be interested in checking out my book 'The Zodiac Hunt'? I'll return the favor as fast as possible :)
BriBaileygrant
Your plot is good. There is too much detail where they should not be as much as the next paragraph. Your use of work in this is truly acknowledged, you should try reading it in a visual point of view and connect with yourself as much as possible that way the reader can get a realistic vibe from the writing. Amazing.
-Brianna
Hustle_Everyday_
@BriannaGraceDe thank you Briana. I am trying to write better. I will not stop, and yes we all erote from our experiences. Thank you so much for the support and help. xx
BriBaileygrant
Wanna know my secret? It's speaking through experience. I meet so many people who affect my life in extraordinary ways. That's how you write to an extent with passion, feeling and connection.
Lots of love,
Brianna
Hustle_Everyday_
@BriannaGraceDe thanks for the suggestion. I will try to keep it more realistic and try to make it more relatable. Thank you so much again. And you're book another kind of romeo and juliet is very good.. Really!!
ouroblivion
Hey thanks for liking my stuff ....as for your books for a 17yr old is not bad there still alot more you can learn the only thing i can comment on is use of proper wording wich you will learn later on don't give up i appreciate you reading my stuff im not talented myslef it took several hit and miss still im not popular here but if you need anything let me know i love to help or try too ill vote on your book
Hustle_Everyday_
@ouroblivion thank you for the support. I will work on my vocabulary. And no, don't say that, you are very talented. That's why I asked in the first place. xx
Shashadsh
hey there
pls try it out ♡♡
http://my.w.tt/UiNb/uAxCJKKiXw
Hustle_Everyday_
@Shashadsh im sorry but can you give me the name of the story. The link's not working
Nishyara
hey dude thanks for following me. love ya peace out :-)