Hey!
You might have forgotten by now that you shared your story on my discussion called Bring On The Gems. I have finally got round to read your story after weeks of coursework, exams and illness.
I love your writing. The text was easy to read. I was hooked straight away. The cover of the book was excellent. I cannot do book covers for toffee!
I am so excited for the next part. What is the secret going to be? Sorry, I am really impatient at cliffhangers!
I have voted for your story. Overall, really well done. :)
P.S You are very welcome to read some of my works if you wish.
