HyperSniper24

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Story: Tsundere Love(Rewrite)
              "...I for one am skeptical of the new 'admiral' assigned here after they let the previous one fuck us all." HMS Glasgow grimaces to her sister, HMS Edinburgh. Who is in a nursing bed, sipping tea with a dead stare. The morning rays beaming into the room from the window along with the salty winds.
              Along with the kansen is another figure watching over the catatonic girl.
              "We seem to be in agreement, Glasgow. But might I remind you to be cautious in your dealings with the new one. Rumors dictate the previous crew and the kansen they are assigned to supported him." HMS Hood speaks up.
              "Likely a lie." Glasgow spat.
              Hood Nods in agreement before turning her gaze to the ill-responsive Edinburgh.
          
          Terribly sorry this has to be announced in a two-partee, the word limit didn't allow for me too. hope you enjoyed these samples!

HyperSniper24

Nearly four months… yeah, you guys deserve a sample as to what I am cooking. So enjoy!
          
          Story: Art of War
              The rotor wash pound the surrounding rubbles as the the Blackhawks descend to a set altitude. Kicking dust and loose rocks away from the pair of machines.
              The side doors slide open, Arthur grasps his chair hard, tossing the loose end of the rope overboard. He watches as it runs out of rope to continue and dangles about bellow the helicopter.
              "Drop! Drop! Drop!" The operator near him screamed. Arthur quickly made sure his weapon is strapped on tight before grabbing the rope and jumps, quickly rapping his leg around, Arthur made a silent decent, reaching the end of the rope about a few centimeters from the ground.
              His boots hit the ground with an audible thud, quickly bringing his weapon to bare, scanning the surrounding area, visible paths, and suspected hiding places.
          
          Story: Land of the United Free(Rewrite)
              > Capital City of Georgia, Atlanta, United State of America, 10th of April 2019,  0913 hours.
          
              The usual busy streets of Atlanta is now an eerie silent calm. The roads that was once filled with vehicles traveling far is empty save for a couple of abandoned ones. In the middle of a wide road in M.L.K. Jr Dr SW, see a group of men in gray clothing with their firearms up against their shoulders.
              The one at the front pulls his horse into a halt, the men following ceasing their march in response.
              "What in th' world happened?" The leader asks, scanning the urban landscape around them. His men subtly doing the same.
              "Begging your pardon, Captain, but might I inquire as to our present position?" Speaks one of the people around the leader.
              "I should inquire the same, First Lieutenant." The leader responds, turning to the officer.
              "Captain. I recommend we set about finding allies without delay." The Lieutenant speaks.
              The captain lets out a deep breath, "I agree." He simply replies, urging his horse to trot on forward.

HyperSniper24

Three words: "Work in Progress." I am serious, though. I have been working on  this new story, from the writing to the tale of the story. Some may not like how I write it, especially with the context of digital books. But honestly, I enjoy this writing style more.
          
          Now about my previous stories... I am sorry to announce that I will... have to take more time to rework them, Tsundere Love has been through major rework while struggling to write LoTUF 20th chapter because I got confused in the story consistency. I don't wanna do a rewrite, but I might have to. And again, same as I am doing with Stuck in the Azur World, I will keep the story available for all to read as I rework it.
          
          Now, my goal for this new story is simple, complete a set amount of chapters before stepping back and work on another story for a while. With this, I can stay consistent in writing while also keeping 'busy' in working on chapters for multiple stories.
          
          Also, the name of the new story is: "Art of War"
          
          That is all I will say, Good day/night, and thank you for reading my stories up until now.

Dgdiotristan

Bro can I talk to you for some reason

Dgdiotristan

Bye for now
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HyperSniper24

@Dgdiotristan, Ah, no, not rn. I am working on another story currently in active. So I have put that book on the shelf for now. If I can, I will work on an arc for it. But no ideas came to mind under than a few inspired ones. But that later down the line.
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New! I've finished the reworks of the first five chapter of [LAND OF THE UNITED FREE] If you want to read it, it has already been released. Further more, I have finished the first Act of the Arc for the story! So expect to see some exciting things to happen! 
          
          Meanwhile, two weeks left until the next chapter is posted. Better work on the next Tsundere Love Chapter, Till we meet again!

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HyperSniper24

Ya'know? Maybe putting Land of the United Free on hold when I release chapter ten to fix some of the stuff in previous chapters will help make making future chapters more easier. Same for Tsundere Love, but that another can of worms to open.
          
          I will only change parts like inconsistent story development, name changes, and some plot point where I was trying to do something and then abandoned it later. Nothing major, just what devs call "Slight Bug Fixes."
          
          For now I will plan the future of the story a head of time incease I want to change some bits again. Thank you for reading!